Writing · Dec 11, 2025
Notes on Noticing
Seven small observations about overheard sentences, weather, and the quiet labor of paying attention.
I keep a note on my phone called things with no current purpose. It is the most useful document I own.
It contains a bus conductor humming the same four notes between stops. A man carrying flowers with the solemnity of a legal document. The sentence, “I did not know the sea could be so tired,” overheard near a tea stall.
None of this is a song. Not yet.
Attention before meaning
There is a temptation to turn every observation into a metaphor immediately. To make the rain stand for grief before it has even reached the ground. I am trying to let things remain themselves for longer.
A cracked cup is allowed to be a cracked cup. A missed train can simply be a missed train. Meaning has a way of arriving after it is no longer being chased.
A short list
- People lower their voices when they say something true.
- Every neighborhood has one dog with excellent timing.
- The final light in a building is almost always in a kitchen.
- We apologize to furniture when we walk into it.
- A remembered smell is faster than a remembered face.
- Nobody looks graceful while searching for their keys.
- Most endings are only changes in volume.
The work, perhaps, is to keep enough empty space around a thing that it can tell you what it is.